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A possible last Doze I suppose

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2021-02-04 16:57

I may also be now on the jet
going to join gone neopoets

who have already left us bereft
I had my first shock today
bled through the night half way

How did I get up
can't really say
perhaps this poem I had to compose today

Neo's if you have time
do read and say
I too was a poet on neopoet
one day
some day
maybe till today

but now so say
let me hear not
deafy me
but shall still see
how you all
till my last
surely loved me

don't leave me aghast
Mark ,Stan
Lave mddy and etc etc etc
including left out Gee
ye
Good bye to those
who read me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
THE LAST ROAD I ALSO NEED TO WALK BUT ALONE
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Fri, 2021-02-05 08:01

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Hello, Lovedly,
You definitely are a poet here on Neo. I will be back to read your poem again tomorrow, and comment further.
Peace!
L

lovedly

Thu, 2021-02-04 23:48

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Lave anxiously

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Lavender

Fri, 2021-02-05 08:08

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Hello, Lovedly,
There is always a line or phrase in your poetry that touches me. "...perhaps this poem I had to compose today." What a moving thought in knowing one of the generous reasons for living each day.
Thank you!
L

lovedly

Sat, 2021-02-06 14:40

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more like you are needed by neo
tc
you make me extend the balance time
All is well till ''we are we ARE"
said a doc ill for 9 months
revived by medical science
a friend of mine

I now follow him

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Geezer

Fri, 2021-02-05 09:10

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surely, you cannot think that we will forget or love you any less, once you are gone? If and when the time comes, you shall have as great a send-off as any Neopoet! So you leave me until last? For shame, I shall not be last! Though the die is cast and it be craps-out, listen, listen you will hear me shout; Lovedly was the craftiest of all, he was the one who took it to the wall.
~ Geez.
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lovedly

Fri, 2021-02-05 12:51

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when we all are gone
no one ever will know
in the cool breeze of wilderness
in the throes of darkness
like lost eagles
we will fly
beyond the ethereal skies
towards eternity if we can hope to reach...

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