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Possibilia

Submitted by Apostolos "Paul... on Sun, 2012-01-15 20:28

Tonight the northern star and I will speak
Together will see the power of fantasy
No alarm to wake me or lingering responsibilities

No fee to pay only the spark of friendship
No slithering monotony to have its way with me
I know it seems optimistic, in a cosmos so twisted

The sounds of grand pianos play until daybreak
Festive wine poured into every glass this night
That dream is not just vivid, it’s ready to be lived

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Nordic cloud

Mon, 2012-01-16 04:02

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Together we'll see?
no responsibilities no alarm awake me
no alarm awake me no responsibility
the spark of friendship, no fee to pay
not so fond of the word slithering for monotony
this optimistic thought in twisted ...no

Grand pianos sound till daybreak
sparkling wine fills each glass this night
my dream......!

Well I hope I don't offend but for me I was troubled here and there Paul.
Just ignore me, but I did think around it. Ann.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

Apostolos "Paul...

Mon, 2012-01-16 04:47

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Thank you for stopping by will take it under advisement

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