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The Portrait (July Contest)

Submitted by Rula on Wed, 2017-07-26 04:24

http://www.winterparkpaintout.org/imagearea/StacyBarter_2015_ALittlePeck...

A little peck on the cheeks spell
blends colorful thoughts in my way
Carmine red attacks the purple
A rainbow then floods my entrée.

A scope of emotions springs when
A little peck on the cheeks spell
Enriches lust and deep champagne
Then each petal speaks to the belle.

A sample of nature's show and tell
With passionate red paints my day.
A little peck on the cheek spell
Would bring to home an early May.

A portrait of breathtaking space
A brilliant brush has to excel
A real investment, I'd purchase
"A little peck on the cheek" spell.

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Rula

Wed, 2017-07-26 08:24

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for dropping by and for the wishes.
Always great to hear from you. Much appreciated.

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Rula

Wed, 2017-07-26 13:28

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how nice of you to pass by and leave such an encouraging comment. Highly valued.

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Geezer

Thu, 2017-07-27 11:46

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if this painting has to do with a fable about Cygnus and [ I believe a Greek god ] at any rate, a well put together poem that captures the imagination. ~ Gee

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Rula

Thu, 2017-07-27 15:42

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I really can't say if it has any relation to the fable you've mentioned Gee. I appreciate your visit and the comment. Glad to know that you like it anyway.
Thank you!

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