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POETRY AS JESS TAUGHT ME

First day first dose
he kicked me
Wanker do you know
damn poetry
Go play football...
Over time he kicked me harder
testing my nerve
but I was a bullet
not an arrow
he got unnerved ...

GRADUALLY HE STARTED LIKING ME
then taught me all the nuances
of WHAT POETRY is ..

Wait for tomorrow I shall return...

ADD ON...

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I can't wait to
what lessons from the master
you can show this little me
I really am quite anxious
I think you would agree

Let's see a masterpiece
Come on, show me more
Show me tricks, show me dreams
Run down the sandy shore

I'll dig up the body
We'll make a ritual scene
Have a picnic at the graveside
We'll let him be real mean

I'll be waiting... ~ Geez.
.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Reading you is an equal treasure
keeping you in mind is living pleasure
got up late so I desire you wait

I shall a masterpiece make
my life you stake

good poetry you rake

author comment

He was a master of poetry! I missed him so much. I used to chat him on messenger. He has a good command of English. He was a good instructor.

"Poetic license
gives
the poets
the free will to
embroider a good tale
and deviate from the established rules of language"~Jackweb

I miss Jess too. he asked me to send him my book (eddy styx: "The Book Of Styx" he said that he enjoyed it very much, and corrected a few mistakes, LOL! we had chats in the Chat Room.

looking forward to more...
*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

u will like some of his teachings I share with all many now follow me thanks Cats to poets well wishers like are yee

author comment

Good things hardly last! May his gentle soul rest in perfect peace.

"Poetic license
gives
the poets
the free will to
embroider a good tale
and deviate from the established rules of language"~Jackweb

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