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poetry of flowers

Submitted by loved on Thu, 2012-10-11 13:29

poetry of flowers

you are superb I’m still on the first step
of the ladder ....
who will hold my hand
and
pull me up
but you!

lovely flowery poetry
all about roses and daffodils,
lotus, jasmine and what have you…
yeah lily’s for mummy too

the smiling pansies
and
the purple hue
are some flowers we all love

such is it the way of nature to please
ah poetry of flowers
tis
or is?

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Fri, 2012-10-19 17:22

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Today flowers tomorrow tears it is the changes of life my friend it is just the changes.
A good write on the flowers would you like to expand on this one, Yours Ian.T....
You see I will not leave you here it is a desolate place and there are few flowers here but many tears .....

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Sat, 2012-10-20 00:57

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names of many more flowers
or something to add on
a flow of tears ?
w h i c h

loved

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