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poetic succession

Submitted by crypticbard on Wed, 2010-12-08 23:40

There is always a poem after this one;
the understudy to today's centre stage:

This poem however, is never unimportant,
it is as individual as the poem that follows;
many written poems have unwritten forbears-
each poem is breathed and lived; rarely spoken.

The panorama of this poem is found in one place –
the window of its reader's imagination;
so each poem is the beginning point
of new journeys that we join with the poet.

Another poem is birthing at the end of this one;
there may be several, in fact, awaiting their turn.

Review Request (Intensity):

I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Comments

mand

Thu, 2010-12-09 03:04

Clever!

I like the way your mind works! You are a deep thinker.

I enjoyed the progression of thought and logic.

Well done

Love Mand xxxxxxxxx

crypticbard

Thu, 2010-12-09 04:41

Thanks Mand

You are most appreciated. And yes, I have experienced moments of lucidity. Else I am probably a garden variety poet. Thanks again for your kind words. CB

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Kailashana2

Thu, 2010-12-09 05:09