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A Poet in Pause

Submitted by Serendipity on Mon, 2015-02-09 11:10

Poems sway,
I'm nearly known,
in unknown fields
littered with poets
enthralled and entranced
in the washing waves
of the word ...

this is bliss,
I am now
the ocean
lapping
at your shore.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Just a thought or two I think I may expand on I don't know I'll get back to you lol soon as I am able .... love x
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Sparrow

Mon, 2015-02-09 11:15

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Great, Great, and more Great to see you there,
You may pause in your writing, but our love of your words just carries on, just you come back when you is good and ready,
Know that we all love you and hold you,
Yours as always Ian and the Children, xxx

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Serendipity

Tue, 2015-02-10 11:27

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I often wonder how your all doing
I do miss our interactions and all
of our chats.

I will be here from time to time
but i am going ro be awol for
quite a few weeks after my
operation on Monday its
a bigger operation than the last
two, no ! actually three now lol

but as soon as I am well enough
I'll email and let you know
how things go ....

Love always Jayne xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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Serendipity

Tue, 2015-02-10 11:53

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Wooops Haven't done that in forever !!!

:-D xox

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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raj

Mon, 2015-02-09 11:47

Ian has already said what i would have. Really so good to see you. Take best care and get well soon...you are always missed big bunches here..

much love n hugs...

raj (sublime_ocean)

Serendipity

Tue, 2015-02-10 11:30

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Hello my friend I hope your doing better
I am not too bad but I still have a ways to go

I will be round later today to read no make
tomorrow .... look forward to reading your
latest work

Much love and hugs Jayne xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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mand

Mon, 2015-02-09 12:40

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I ditto above comments! It's always a pleasure to read your poems. :)

Awesome!

Love Mand xxx

Serendipity

Tue, 2015-02-10 11:32

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Hi hun hope your well I am really happy you liked this one
I will poke my head in and see what you been cooking up

love and hugs Jayne xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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scribbler

Mon, 2015-02-09 16:02

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poetry but mere thoughts put to verse. Wishing you the best as always.......stan

Serendipity

Tue, 2015-02-10 11:34

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What else is it ? Hmmmmm
the soul of our deepest thoughts
laid bare to the world, maybe ?

Thank you

love sis x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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emogothgirl

Mon, 2015-02-09 21:03

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great to hear from you. i would love to see you elaborate on this, if you ever do. it's lovely to have you back, however briefly.

mag

Serendipity

Tue, 2015-02-10 11:38

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Really glad you liked this I have already begun to elaborate this one and I will post the update tomorrow night, I read one of your recent poems it was really really good I will come back tomorrow and leave my thoughts

Kindest regards Jayne x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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judyanne

Tue, 2015-02-10 09:28

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lovely to read you again
i rather like this.... great descriptive
nothing to suggest

love judd
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

Serendipity

Tue, 2015-02-10 11:53

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Hi honey hope your well your looking amazing Btw I love the picture, I have been really ill and I get tired easily but with a little time I will be back to as close to normal as I am going to get, look forward to the sonnet I noticed it in stream and had a quick scan, I look forward to the read and I will leave some thoughts I had ...

love and biggest hugs Jayne xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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alidzain

Sun, 2015-03-29 20:21

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sorry for being late. I loved this piece. It is short but it speaks volumes. By the way have you read my poem entitled "A Message To A Friend"? I posted it as a dedication to all my friends who are facing pain in life. It is written with my thoughts on you when we are both ill. Good to have you back, angel. I really miss you so much.

Alid

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