Perhaps this is the first time I am reading any Haiku written by you. But this is just lovely.
Regards
Ayaz

Stan,

I have recently started to enjoyed the challenge of Haiku...what seems simple on the face of it, ends up being a difficult task indeed.

I enjoyed these Haiku's, but you'll need to look at:

and phrases to write in order (1+2+1+1+1+2)

which has 8 syllables.

I noticed this last night and have been thinking of an alternative for you...many hours later, I have a solution of sorts:

Mind searching for words
and phrases to pen in line
to form an image

I have never written poetry before and had to count on my fingers!! Lol!

Sorry for finding the error, it wasn't my intention.

Cheers,

HS

informs me japanese haikus

were actually meant to appreciate nature .

well he says first line

and third line are interchangeable

i'll ask him if i can post the analysis he gave

or better still ask him to do it

if u say so

but ur CREATIVITY IS UNIQUE
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