The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The Buzzard is a thought-provoking and intense poem that delves into the harsh realities of the hunting world. The poem's use of vivid imagery and sensory language creates a palpable atmosphere, immersing the reader in the narrator's experience.

The poem effectively highlights the cruelty and selfishness of poachers and hunters, using the buzzard as a metaphor for their predatory and destructive behavior. The juxtaposition of the buzzard's majestic and powerful presence with the vulnerable and helpless animals it preys on emphasizes the unfairness of the situation.

The poem's theme is clear and impactful, but some of the phrasing and syntax could be refined for greater clarity and flow. For example, in the first stanza, "broad bower" feels awkward and could be replaced with a more concise and descriptive phrase. Additionally, the line "And make the sound of bullets flying high from metal prism" could benefit from rewording to better match the poem's overall tone.

Overall, The Buzzard is a powerful and thought-provoking poem that effectively conveys a strong message. With some minor edits, it could further enhance the impact of its message.

Suggested line edit: "And make the sound of bullets flying high from metal prism" could be revised to "Its wings beat like bullets from a metal prism, a pounding throb that freezes me in place."

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Neo. the AI has this one pretty much right. However, I don't see where the line:
"In silent wood with anxious pace, I creep below broad bower, is awkward.
Natures power needs an apostrophe: [nature's]

[Furrow] should be [B]urrow, a furrow is something that scratches or digs a trench
along the surface.

[trench] is not exactly the right word for the last line of the first stanza
I think [den] would be much better while preserving the meter.

I wouldn't present her babies as an army, when you are trying to make the case of
them being helpless. How about calling them by the proper name of [kits]?
The word [small] could be added to it, making it [small kits] underground.

Again, an apostrophe needed in [nature's].

I would seek another two lines to replace the first two in the fourth stanza.
Bullets are not usually used in fox hunts, and the use of prism as the source doesn't fit
with any kind of firearm I can think of.
I'm sure that there is a better way to express the idea of the employer and poacher
marking these kits for a lifetime of containment and eventual death.
I tried to think of it, but I fear I am beginning to rewrite your whole poem.

A tradition of the gentry, [landers] shortened, yet recognizable as landowners and recreation abusers
[again , a shortened version of a word easily recognizable. One last word change, [sole] accusers.

As always, twist it, use it, or abuse it, the advice is free. ~ Geezer.
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that you are right. I do believe this particular AI has not been a poetry critic for long, but I have been assured that it is learning. I have seen changes in its direction to the writer. ~ Geezer.
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Hello, Ruby,
I appreciate this poem from the perspective of both a poet and a vegan. The subject matter is relevant and very clear. When read aloud, the poem has a nice, natural flow and your rhyme is tight and logical. The two lines regarding the poacher and the landlord feel a little forced, but the word "entertainment" is very strong and lends itself to the meaning of the poem. Possibly work it in from a different angle? Very much liked the imagery of the buzzard.
Thank you, Ruby!
Lavender

I like your changes! Flows really well, and the meaning is still strong.
L

made some changes and made it better, no doubt. Nicely done!
~ Geezer.
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