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Pillow Note #3

before leaving for work I want to say
about time when in our arms we lay
songs you sung were enchanting
your soft sighs too often enticing
those notes you sung in high pitch
made nerve ends tingle and twitch

tonight we shall replay that song
with all it's notes short and long
each time we touch cloud nine
we'll play our songs in rewind

when you wake up you'll find this note
with your pink lipstick just now I wrote
when i return home please stay tuned
wearing your best smile like full moon

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Soft erotica can be read between the lines.
I hope they will be enough to satisfy the lady in quest
to wear that smile like the full moon.

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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thank you Rula for reading and your comment..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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This really is beautiful. I feel the passion. I feel the yearning for the next touch. I can't understand why there is not more comments I do think it deserves a new title but thats just me. There is love in this poem not just lust.

Beautifully done. I Bow.

Love and biggest hugs J xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

for taking time to read and for your good words....means a lot...

warmly
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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