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Pillow Note # 3

I know you are feeling Blue
so I wrote this note on Pink
to make you blush so Beau
like "Peaches"
my nick for You...

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i can just say WOW....what a lovely Pillow Note...who will ever say NO to "want to play Birds and bees" i am sure your Beau will go head over heals reading

much love... and smiles..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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a good idea..we could all contribute to that collection...certainly for a worthy cause these pillow notes are supposed to do light up the lives of spouses by re-kindling the flame of romance...

much love n smiles..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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wow again....thats an absolutely stimulating pillow note....surely a re-kindling stuff....

much love...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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