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tore!
toe!

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I usually like brevity, sharp and straight to the point free verse, and
this is not an exceptional, yet the ending "toe !" is a bit hard bite.
Would really appreciate a hint if you care to get me a reader of yours :)

Again a very warm welcome.
Looking forward to reading more of your works.

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