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PHASES

PHASES
Each beginning has an end
and each end brings us to
one more beginning,, one more end.
like the phases of the moon we die
to the world we know to rise again
different and the same.
the years push us to change and grow,
rise and fall, until we can rise no more

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gain under control
Joe roll

actually, it was Richard. thanks for reading me, my friend.

joe for joe

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thanks to Richard too
Joe we all know

Journey of the soul very nicely scripted in these verses Joe...

Warm regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

thank you, Raj; it is a difficult road, isn't it.

joe

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so deep man.
But tightly written.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
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Thank you, Keith. The impact of the message s the simplicity of form.

joe

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