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Petrichor

Petrichor this word adds
a lot of fragrance
to your lovely desired imagination...
as the night ebbed away
with the young one
untouched and unscathed,
owing to your wilful castration,
she was unfortunately saved
a passionate penetration
ere ‘twould be rendered a rapists rendition

saved thy skin
you have you through the skin of thy teeth
hope there will come another time beneath
to elate your emotion
in actual motion,
hopefully though tis my surmise
ere the sun doth, it too shall rise

for those who want to know
what... petrichor’’ is
tis the sweet smelling soil
after the rain does the earth spoil
also a guy does wet
his best bet...

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I too love the word petrichor and the fragrance that it brings to the place.
But this writing was a bit a hard bite for me.

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and why hard? Rula

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introduced me to the word PETRICHOR

No shame I did not know then 7 years ago

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