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Perrenial Grasses

I've been sneezing for the last few minutes,
my eyes watering,
my nose running,
I think I've developed allergies
to my impending age,
there's so much more behind me
than
in front of me,
fewer ducks in a row.

I've met my shadow
and fell in love with distance.
I've passed into the middle,
its volume
has been turned down by my outrage
and in my denial.
I've been pruned by unseen hands
speaking in tongues
from a burning bush;
I climb up and down this mountain
passage, at will.
With snow upon my shoulders,
I've crossed rivers from which there
can be no return nor turning back.

I'm on the brink of something or another,
like an inch worm, hanging from its thread.
I take another bite into this juicy red apple
called life,
innocent as Snow White, offering her heart
to the huntsman, wicked as the stepmother,
asking who is fairest in all the kingdoms.
A flock of blackbirds become words,
I read myself into this poem.

There are stories and some of them are mine.

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The hardest thing to do is wait.
But you and I don't watch flowers grow
moment by moment, do we? There is much
too much
distraction to move us
from sitting
still like that number always falling in time,
minute after minute on the edge of
a thin red line between this and that.

Meditating or procrastinating,
it matters little or nothing
if life depends not on human beings
noticing blue skies, lilies, and seashells along their way.
The Sistine Chapel points no fingers
above or below
if the modern Madonna is empty-handed, white
with stone.
I don't know why I
should live this moment in eternity
with you.

Do you?

Astral bodies remember their bliss sometimes
and we can walk somewhere but don't remember
where we've been much less how we'll get back.
Our days
are numbered. If a tree falling
in the forest can be heard by someone
or another far enough away, will we live to see infinity
in the bones
of stardust and lucid memory?

Yellow ribbons mark the place,
tied to a song
that sings
to know itself again for the first time.
It's all I can hope for, I think. And hope makes
the knot stronger.
I do not wither away
with the flowers
and neither do you.

When the day breaks in beauty,
who can speak of its cruelty?

author comment

I liked your title, it intrigued me. but my first impression, on reading the first verse, is that this reads more like a diary entry. On reading further, I liked these lines, because they tell me more about the real you:

I've met my shadow
and fell in love with distance.
I've passed into the middle,
its volume
has been turned down by my outrage
and in my denial.
I've been pruned by unseen hands
speaking in tongues
from a burning bush;
I climb up and down this mountain
passage, at will.

always, Cat

*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Aren't all our poems a weird combination of story/poem/diary/tome?

Sometimes they even include our shadow-side. ;-)

Thanks to you,
I would never fling poo,
it's not the desert I would wear
in my hair,
smelling sweetly
and discretely,
lavender green
and mellow yellow,
shades of brown,
shades of black.

;-)

~A

and

author comment

'I think I've developed allergies
to my impending age,'
me too.

You do make it hard to give constructive crit, Anna.

What can I say, love the poem, a rich, meaningful, delightful synergy of poignancy, pain and joy.

cheers,
Jess
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