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Pendulum

If I reached in and pulled
you out
would you be grateful?
Swing the pendulum
to test
the question

My finger tingles
the energy flows like white water
but your black heart
will contaminate
down the lane of your
ancestry
or the next village
in the next century
or ten

I can clear it with
green brilliant light
from the love-cave
sparkling squibs
cleansing and filtering

Bring the pendulum dear
ask the question
I write to my descendants
they will book the pumps
and engineers

Actions follow thoughts
Einstein and Buddha
agree

Last few words: 
Quantum
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Comments

I have read this several times without success.
Your first Stanza:-
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If I reached in and pulled
you out
would you be grateful?
Swing the pendulum
to test
the question
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This piece seems to be lost in what is going on where are you pulling him from, is it from your memories or is he stuck someplace.
I felt that there was no base unless I missed the whole point.
I could see it from a loss point of view where you wanted to get rid of having someone there inside of your thoughts.
No doubt you will tell me, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Hi Ian,

I belong to The British Society of Dowsers...been playing with my pendulums to help & develop my intuition. Pendulums & dowsing sticks /rods guide by electromagnetic forces.

The clue was 'Quantum' that I'd written in last few words. Quantum, energy, vibration, frequency....testing your intuition, do you think you always read it? Would you be grateful to your subconscious if you really got the answers you were searching for? LOL

Better luck next time Ian.

Ells x

author comment

Well Ley lines and terrible swings.
I missed the word Quantum of all things.
Didn't expect a dowser to appear
Thought someone was playing in there

It is part of my spiritual world and many things
Of what crystals, palmistry, and tarot sings
I shall watch out for what you are up too
So that I can comment for you true.

I shall ask my children to watch for me
There may be some form of trickery
I have in deep trance many times been
Yet am still learning of the inner world seen.

Take care out there sorry I missed the point of your write,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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