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Paul the piano player

Paul the piano player
let’s his hands
be symphonic sailors.
Rowing through
a rapid rhythm
trying to find
if his talent’s
with him.
But all he can
find is the
empty space
held within
his mind.

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Not Explicit Content

Comments

a couple of friends named Paul and this could be about either of them. LoL
I like the easy rhythm that this takes and the message that maybe some people don't see that their talents are worthy, or have merit. Nice work. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

I agree with Geezer's assessment. I really like this poem it flows smoothly. my favorite lines are:

But all he can
find is the
empty space
held within
his mind.

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Is you don’t know how much talent you have until it’s gone.

https://youtu.be/SHAYboVGur0

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

author comment

thank you.

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

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