Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Passionate Inferno (Explicit Content)

As I lay beside you
The bonfire in my chest kindled
As our fingers brush and our palms meet
The blaze grew stronger
As our limbs entangled
Our faces draw closer

When our lips introduce themselves
The flames expanded
Our tongues meet and our desire grows
With my touch stroking your thigh
I could feel the ardor radiating from your skin

While I stroke your cheek
A fiery night full of passion arises
And the inferno consumes my heart.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Explicit Content


Surely the 1st line should read "lie" not "lay"? The rest of the poem is ALL in the present tense so the 1st line should also be in the present tense.

(c) No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.