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in passing the twilight..... friends
see us in golden light
as emerges the
ultimate night
let memories for ever remain bright
when we all are out of sight
till then many a candle light!
while you can
continue the fight
alright!
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Free verse
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Comments
alidzain
Sat, 2014-10-18 20:18
loved this
Death may steal one's soul
but memories are ours to keep
until they grow so old
from our mind, they'll slip
Still the feelings still there
the key to their revival
it will always be there somewhere
be it free or entangled
so fear not the coming of the night
for my love is the blanket keeping you warm
my prayers will grant you the light
and shield you from the coming storm
Alid
Geremia
Sat, 2014-10-18 21:02
Splendid poetry. joe
Splendid poetry.
joe
alidzain
Sun, 2014-10-19 01:15
Thank you. Yours is just as
Thank you. Yours is just as good.
Alid
lovedly
Sun, 2014-10-19 12:41
thanks Joe
you really encourage me
Hope you shall continue to do
all the best take good care
the sun has not set
as yet!