Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

The Passage Of Time

Yesterday
has come to pass,
leaving behind an imprint of memories,
that has shaped us into what we are
with lessons learnt from history.

Today,
is the struggle for the future,
a trial, standing in our path
as we strive to be better
and to achieve the happiness
we have always wanted.

Tomorrow,
is a story, yet to be told,
be it the legend of the bold
or the cowardice that lingers
in the hearts of young and old.
No one knows
before the mystery is unfold.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing stage: 

Comments

A nice poem khalid. I like the title and the language use. I can't find anything to flaw at the moment but much appreciation.
Thanks for sharing

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Please follow me on Instagram
https://instagram.com/poetry.jo?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

Thank you for the visit, the read and the comment.

Alid

author comment
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.