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PARADISE WHERE

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2020-09-21 16:48

I've never ever thought
of another
PARADISE
but this Earth
so many teach me
how I still live
in a FOOL'S
Paradise
when all others believe in one
Geez has given me up as a
foolish one

hope to hear from you all
throw your dice will you
I shall then feel the pulse of your
PARADISE

as I am preparing to fly
the rainbow you say
I can't now see
SANS Shakespeare
perhaps
now he's calling me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Tell me how FOOLISH I AM Grade me out of 100
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Mon, 2020-09-21 21:59

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Hi, Lovedly,
What's that quote? "Paradise is not a place, it's a state of mind."
Thank you!
L

lovedly

Mon, 2020-09-21 22:03

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I G N O R A n C E

alone is Blissssssssssssssssss
tthanks

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