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I've never ever thought
of another
but this Earth
so many teach me
how I still live
in a FOOL'S
when all others believe in one
Geez has given me up as a
foolish one

hope to hear from you all
throw your dice will you
I shall then feel the pulse of your

as I am preparing to fly
the rainbow you say
I can't now see
SANS Shakespeare
now he's calling me

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Tell me how FOOLISH I AM Grade me out of 100
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Not Explicit Content


Hi, Lovedly,
What's that quote? "Paradise is not a place, it's a state of mind."
Thank you!

I G N O R A n C E

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author comment

Paradise is what Italians call heaven, is it a place? i don't believe so personally, although i like to think so because those who do believe "like my dear friend who was only 34 and died of skin cancer" believed it. its a nice picture to believe in before one dies, but thats just my opinion. state of mind is a bit harsh we all have our own states and indeed beliefs. Thank you.

Thank you...Teddy

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