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Paradise what

This poem is an outburst of a cloud of thunder of appreciation, by someone who is a wonder Rest you may all read onnnn

Where is paradise friend
someone asked
a masked NEOpoet like me

Where else!

The winding path to paradise
you are welcome to
where human angels
as you know reside

I ain't an angel
but a simple poet of peace
who upon soles of human kind
adoration, appreciation only preach

peace be with all of us
who slog in the middle of nights
in search of solace
comforting words
the world with which to preach

darkness lightens
dreams awaken
and many imaginations
are born to poets
who seem to be forlorn
as the morning breeze beckons 'em

Come the sunrise is due
where’s the poem
now which
from you is due

let dreams be the harbinger of calm
quiet and peace
the night be warm and cozy
for you all humans

Paradise what
all beseech

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Free verse
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Beautiful wording... It has good texture to it.. Honestly.. Keep up the great work..


Paul Harris

for filling my heart
maiden call yours
thanks again

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