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Paradise Gained

Paradise Gained

You've paved a way,
To paradise you say,
You have a heart
need no brains any way

So now that you reside
In paradise all day
Donate your head and brains,
If any, to strangers
Who stray thy way?

Keep your heart anyway
Brains are a waste
Throw them away,

Yes that’s right
Straight away

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there is a lot lost by those who over think things. well put...............scribbler

As the new year has dawned
once again
i wish you a very many
happier a morn
and many more ,
many more
such dawns


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