Hello IRiz
Actually I think you need one more comma after wide-world. All the commas are necessary because this is written in compound-complex sentences.

Only the word order in the first dependent clause is unclear to me, it seems to be saying (both examples) that the branches are fading in the air, but I think you mean the petals are fading in the air; if so, this looks clearer:

walking on petals
already fading before falling from branches,

you have quite an imagination!

and the tulip lines have that faint flavor of you know what--Surrealism!

Well, maybe I can help with that :
Walking on the petals fallen
from the fading in air branches
thinking it was only leaves from distant autumn
(already forgotten season of the winds)
I have crossed the ocean in my dreams.

Listening to murmur of
droplets on the rooftops, those fluttering umbrellas,
thinking it was only distant birds and lonely
shadows resurfacing on the evening ink
hypnotizing pylons of the wooden bridge.

I have lost my caution
and I wrote a poem. Thrown in the wide-world
paper boat , floating in the brown waters
losing paper soldiers overboard like seeds
of hopeful and joyous tulip trees.

OK so I also put in some stanza breaks and a word here and there in order to stymie the "word wall" appearance and to do away with some punctuations. Maybe this is of some help

I don't know how I missed this one earlier but lucky to catch the next flight...by that I also mean the flight of your thoughts...pleasure read...
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