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Pain and suffering

Lord Buddha had said
pain and suffering are inevitable
seek pain
suffering prolongs

to reduce suffering
one must reduce pain
and suffering would also be gone
so don't hang on

pay heed to the philosophy
of the learned one
he left home all of a sudden
in order to live
in the hearts of mankind
for all times to come
for ever

so move along
forget the inevitable it’s gone
and move along
suffering too will be gone
wow twill vanish
it applies today even as much
when the Lord did experience

we must share good things from all religions

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Buddha would cry to hear your cries.
Where did you hear that Buddha said that you must look for pain.
It is pain of the physical body that we must endure.
Pain of the Spirit is for you to control.
No Soul/Spirit can suffer pain only disorientation due to being in a physical body.
As you make that leap from this life to the true Spirit,
then you will know, that your pain was for you to learn of Pain.
There must be no leaving early to escape these things,
They were your choice for ever,
and the only way to learn of these things.
Go well young Bard,
I shall talk to thee in the ways of old,
yet do I hear that you sometimes don't listen.
Tis but a leap of faith to understand that inner self.
The real you, Yours as always Ian.T

I have to wander into the night and hope that the dreamtime is only until the dawn, Night....

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

this one u will have to read twice
what Buddha said
about pain and its carry forward how u must avoid


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