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Owl Said

Owl asked "Where are you headed to young traveler?"

"To tomorrow and all that awaits me there."

Owl's eyes blinked in the slow-motion way that they will
and said "Don't hurry past the beauty among the ordinary here today,
where all you have to do is see it."

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Comments

what you might hear if you were watching a Chinese movie and listening to the wise, old, sage talking to his protege. Nice!
~Geezer.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

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