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owl

gimbaled, wide eyes blink

shiver, yawn - ruffle brown drape

morning turns grimace

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words: 
Time Jumper - thanks!
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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I don't get is : "shiver- a yawn rocks it's drapes." The other lines are clever, but I think that one is too enigmatic. ~ Geez.
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tough little bugger..

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That is much better! ~ Geez.
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I can just see an owl acting this way as morning dawns

Thanks, great to know that.
Later,

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to write about Hooters lol

want em in my face any old tie though lol

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