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open ALL doors

do remind me
Sparoe /ion

when the doors are about to close
I shall then enter
through your open door
and open a pandora's door
(OKAY NO METAPHOR THEN BOX..)

beware lots of bees will be there
keep your door secure
and locked
or have a fire near by
ere the bees stick to yours

doors friends
what else ?
happens
behind closed doors....

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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If and when I do go through any of those doors and there are bees there they will do me no harm as we will all be as one,
Take care, this is not a poem and may gather criticism from a few sources lol,
Yours Ian

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

no moss
at least i roll to collect some
what of criticism are you afraid
let some my way come

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