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OOOOOO YES MOMMY

Oooooo Yes Mommy
You all
can never beat me

I wake up when someone special
kicks me

it's 1, 30 PM
Sonny
get up will ye

breakfast, lunch and dinner
together for ye

I smile and wink
@ my wifey
she loves me

no more useless cooking

come first kiss me
and
she smiles

have you brushed
no not me

GET up
before comes the doggy
he will kiss ye

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I liked this one a lot
And if he brushes not
then leave him to the dog
Let him have whole hog!
Another great fun poem to read
More advice for me to heed?
Yes, I must admit it,
it seems I cannot
QUIT IT!

Blessed Be
April Dawn

"If my poetry aims to achieve anything, it's to deliver people
from the limited ways in which they see and feel." -Jim Morrison

dawning
and
encouraging

HAPPY NEW YEAR
31ST DEC
IS ABOUT TO BE OVER
A new angel will emerge
Maybe
a new Dalai Lama

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