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only lonely

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2016-01-18 19:39

loneliness yes
but not aloneness
kisses are given
only by loved ones
the heart yearns for more
many just can't adore
that's why poets are for
what else
who will love em more
unless their love
out to the world they pour
your poetry helps me for sure
some one will hear me
and
take me ashore
where we may love
each other much more
till then kindly endure

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Sparrow

Tue, 2016-01-19 04:20

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We walk with you,
we swim with you in Oceans of dreams,
we are here to read your words,
sometimes forget to say more than a whisper,
As usual young Bard a goodly write, Ian ..

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lovedly

Tue, 2016-01-19 10:47

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it's like a mangoes stone

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alidzain

Wed, 2016-01-20 14:08

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"that's why poets are for"

Shouldn't the "why" be "what" instead? Overall, an enjoyable read.

Alid

lovedly

Wed, 2016-01-20 14:17

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matter little
when all that matters is
that you wear well
no not clothes
but visions

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