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Only God knows.......ed

We all live in a wilderness of time
none knows
what can happen
the next moment...

Perhaps a tsunami,
a nuclear explosion
or
the arctic melting overnight
and
the seas washing away all shores
submerging all land,

all is in the unknown hand
I call nature
you may call
God
man

and

yes
woman…..

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

i could read that the theme of your poem is about uncertainties of life irrespective of who brings about the end...but could not understand why you have chosen the title you have...

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

a guy on another site chose the title
can you suggest a better one
thanks raj

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Only God knows...as a title

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thanks again

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I second Rula's suggestion. "Wilderness Of Time" is another one I could suggest..I leave it to you decide which is more fitting.

Alid

why the "ed" in the title?

Alid

It is meant to show that it is edited
Loved... I'm happy you liked the title.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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to thank and acknowledge the other
who does contribute
I could have stated
by Rula
but twas not necessary
khalid

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ok. got ya

Alid

ok

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