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One way to get back in the swing

There was a poet whose work
Caused his readers great irk
But now he has joy
By the quite simple ploy
Of critiquing just like a jerk

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Glad to see your poems. They are a work of Art. Hope all is well with you.
My friend.

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Simply = simple, maybe?

Still laughing!

Respectfully, Jim

"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo

http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/Race_9togo

well spotted.
Fixed

cheers,
Jess
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That's a mischievous piece...glad to see you've still "got it!"...

(Hug) Ells x

Sometimes harsh, sometimes kind, but always honest.

cheers,
Jess
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is YOU!

No verse is free for the man who wants to do a good job. - TS Eliot

http://www.wsgeorge.com/

unless it's bad.

cheers,
Jess
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million perscent
honest.

loved

Honesty free the soul of desert mirages in poetic writings.

*The Collaboration Poetry Workshop
Eternal Renga
Amqerican Version of Japanese Poetry
All Neopoet members are welcome to join in the round robin fun.
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