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One night's stand

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2014-10-07 12:25

Over here in the west
as you know,all from the east
we have folks marrying
all over the world

some come alone
some are fished in
some taken out of a can
then married into sexual profession

they may have earlier called sin
now a situation of win, win
You know how one night stands
came about as Broadways brand?

Later a guy just wrote to me
about his daughter eloping
with some mixed genes kind
German or Italian maybe

so I composed this one quickly
but the guy didn't like it
he sent a pack of condoms
to me
and I asked
if it was for her
or me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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scribbler

Tue, 2014-10-07 14:45

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this was just so-so up to the last 2 lines which made me laugh out loud........stan

lovedly

Tue, 2014-10-07 17:22

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any one really reads and needs condoms
i have a gross unused
sent to me at random

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scribbler

Tue, 2014-10-07 21:29

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Too late....the used ones usually are gross.....................

lovedly

Wed, 2014-10-08 11:04

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sex over the years
and that helps keep marriages last for ever
for those who love each other
and sex regularly

I needn't say it
as you know it already.

Just now I was reading the news papers
they have convinced the Pope too

How I wish they about my intelligence knew
This one is being read only by you
as a goody hubby and with a beauty loving wife
Stan are you.,
and of course me too.

Happy do stay keep from one night's stand away.

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Ian.T

Wed, 2014-10-08 18:20

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You said that they sent condoms to you at Random, there is an Island in Canada called Random, is this where you live, do we send all our stuff to you there if we have finished with it, or what?.
Just cant get my mind around you living at Random, I shall ask Digit to come and see what he can find there.
Take care young Bard and it's your turn to send to a Pink Lady LOL, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

lovedly

Wed, 2014-10-08 22:49

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I am enjoying the Pinky one at Random
r u coming ??

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Ian.T

Thu, 2014-10-09 04:01

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If only for a moment in this life we would know on this net thing who we are talking to and what they really are.
Too many people hide here and seem afraid of being seen or known, later as all things come to an end as they have to I shall call you by the name of loved and there you will be.
Then we shall rejoice and have another tea, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

lovedly

Thu, 2014-10-09 11:43

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enjoy will ye
one night stands not meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Ian.T

Thu, 2014-10-09 13:25

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We will have to have you re programmed, though when you go to the other side there is no need for that anyway it would be impossible, bet you wont die now LOL.
Behave yourself some of us blush at things such as one night rstands Rotflmao, lol.
Take care, yours, Ian

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

lovedly

Thu, 2014-10-09 15:44

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in rapid repetition
makes me me feel ur having quicker attention
as it.... stands
for a STANDING ovation
yours not mine
you needn't blush
ur still suitably young
for standing
stand round one
what did you say that place was
Random

on an island with you w/o CONDOM NOOO WAYYYYYYYYY

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