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Beautiful discussion of God's omniscience,
may I,
ENTER
the reality of the myth of god.
Who is god?
a corrupted form of good,
some guy knew little English
and spelt good as god.
He was thus himself so blessed,
upon his soul all did rest
peace came from within,
if with goodness one did begin
a mutual existence,
with utmost reverence,
co- exist the good god would emerge
from within us naturally.
Then we all shall become
symbols of immortality.
God who?
Jesus, Buddha, Ram or Krishna,
Guru Nanak
and of course Allah,
would as of then, even now,
continue to become eternal symbols
of love all as a singular one.

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Kind of odd how so many who profess to believe in god act in such ungodly manner. So much blood shed over which god is the true god. Why should god not reveal him/herself to many people in many forms and go by many names?.........stan

Is there a God?
if so who, where, why and how.

This could be dealt with better,
as a Blog item,
initiated by those who know more

about the beyond
than here.

You may nominate Ian,
to commence a dialogue,
in order to water minds
of the ilk of my kind,
Stan, the only man.

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We are all part of that eternal being so don't mess up your bit as it makes ours untidy.
One day PM me your addy and I will send you a copy from the tapes I have here of the children on the other side it may help.
As to a God they never talk of a God as a singularity but always talk of levels of Spirit where the purer you are the higher you go, and that this physical being you are, is so that you can experience many things you cannot as a Spirit, and the lessons you learn here, are of your own choice as the theme of things go.
I still keep an open mind, but I have told the children that I will help them in their tasks of rescuing children here that have to return early, and become lost in doing so.
It is a very complex thing but everyone must make their own peace with whatever they deem as a God.
The only thing that I believe in is that you have to live here as a good person to attain anything and that is hard to do but who said life was easy,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I tell a short story sometimes to explain what happened all those years ago in the dark days of Moses.
He was an intelligent man and looked around his village where ever he was and also at the same time looked at what was happening to other villages.
Mostly the other villages as his own were in fighting due to many things such as stealing rape and lots of stupid things that needed addressing so he told them that he was going up into the mountains to think about it, this is where he met Cata Strophe my old stone mason, they talked for hours and had a good Idea.
We shall make basic rules and Cata carved them on stone tablets for eternity.
This is where the ten basic rules for living came from and old Moses saw that his tribe grew great as they had rules to live by.
Gradually these rules were adopted by other tribes, 13 in all, and then they got out of hand and invented a creature called God to explain the talk between Cata and Moses.
I had forgotten that Cata was the original stone mason for Moses before he went to Egypt to carve obelisks.
You have a lovely Sunday out there at least it gives us Heathens a day off each week, did you know that we told the Jews to make their holy day Saturday so we could have two days off.
My old ancestors are laughing at us, as they only had four or five days off a year.
Love you all, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

This is where the... ten basic rules.... for living came from and old Moses saw that his tribe grew great as they had rules to live by.

then apply ur mind
to each one ...
how many we can and do follow today
in a shattered and strewn the world over society
in search of peace
you still call GOD ,
Ian
Have a better Sunday

Good wishes from ur small bard

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The Ten Commandments

I am the Lord thy God Thou shalt have no other gods

No graven images or likenesses

Not take the Lord's name in vain

Remember the sabbath day

Honour thy father and thy mother

Thou shalt not kill

Thou shalt not commit adultery

Thou shalt not steal

Thou shalt not bear false witness

Thou shalt not covet

The Ten Commandments, also known as the Decalogue (Greek: δεκάλογος), are a set of biblical principles relating to ethics and worship, which play a fundamental role in Judaism and most forms of Christianity. They include instructions to worship only God and to keep Sabbath, and prohibitions against idolatry, blasphemy, murder, theft, and adultery. Different groups follow slightly different traditions for interpreting and numbering them.
The Ten Commandments appear twice in the Hebrew Bible, in the books of Exodus and Deuteronomy. According to the story in Exodus, God inscribed them on two stone tablets, which he gave to Moses on Mount Sinai. Modern scholarship has found likely influences in Hittite and Mesopotamian laws and treaties, but is divided over exactly when the Ten Commandments were written and who wrote them.

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Thou shalt not kill.
Thou shalt not commit adultery.
Thou shalt not steal.
Thou shalt not bear false witness against thy neighbour.
Thou shalt not covet thy neighbour's house,
thou shalt not covet thy neighbour's wife,
nor his manservant,
nor his maidservant,
nor his ox, nor his ass,
nor any thing that is thy neighbour's

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