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OK, Very Nice In view of the discouraging comments

OK, Very Nice In view of the discouraging comments
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your comments please.
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Very Nice
The three poems
You will read today
Are the ones
I wrote two years ago
When none read me
Over here
So it makes a difference
In as I always say
What’s in a name?

Everything is ones name
The vibrations,
It’s tuning of the heart,
As ones harp,
A melodious vibration of voice
Of love,
Of emotion
And
Above all
Of basic human commotion.

To my mind that's all what poetry,
In its prosaic
Or
Any modern manifestation
Is all about

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

Dear Loved,,,, Discouraging NOT Encouraging to improve your writing YES.

I told you my opinion through PMs, and I don't see any beauty of a literary work here.
just few statments, nothing more.I can't even call it a poem.

your Libyan friend

Mona Rose

The poem is an extension, a recording if you will
of the voice of the individual soul that travels
from within into the frontiers without
thereby each voice as it resonates must be heard
and accorded its rightful respect.

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'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

Loved.

Someday we'll all understand who you are. And the poetry that you wrote will have been the first of its kind. ;-)

Until then, keep on keeping on....

~A

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