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Oh! Loved and Beauty
Oh! Loved and Beauty
When such lovely faces
Are around,
Beauty is bound to surround
Let the word go around
That beauty has come around
To the poets den,
To lend an ear
Let all about her beauty hear
And
As they smell
The fragrance of love
Let nothing come between
Beauty and the loved
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
loved
Fri, 2011-01-28 08:45
Love and Beauty REVISED as Advised
Love and Beauty
When such lovely faces
Are around
Oh! La, la
Beauty is bound to surround
As the word goes around
That beauty has come aground
To the poets den
At the end
To lend
An ear, for all about her beauty hear
As they inhale
The fragrance of love
Let nothing come between
Beauty and Loved
loved
loved
Fri, 2011-01-28 08:47
Love and Beauty Revised As Advised
Love and Beauty
When such lovely faces
Are around
Oh! La, la
Beauty is bound to surround
As the word goes around
That beauty has come aground
To the poets den
At the end
To lend
An ear, for all about her beauty hear
As they inhale
The fragrance of love
Let nothing come between
Beauty and Loved
loved