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Ode to Passionate Modern Lovers

Passion rarely dies
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and
Aussies are too
gay
many
passionate
all know it

I love the beach
and your sunny
sun down the ocean
snap its a beauty
have you ever read me my
Moms Smiles
do please

and

NOW THIS
when riders ride
they ride like

ALEXANDER THE GREAT

They never look back
were's my valet
and now
do read this

Lovely must have been
her ass
or horse's
will you help
find hers

coz she wears nothing but
her butt
and
smile

in the kids swimming pool
I have lost her
romantic heart
'twas only for me
.
so I have been
looking for her
in the sea

she has nothing on
but
glee

smile please

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

What an odd idea!

xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

Echoes of bewilderment! Sometimes, you unknowingly say the best things, lovedly.
~ Geezer.
.

Honest critique and comments shouldn't hurt.
It's why we are here, to get better at our craft.

I think only you understand
lovedly
thanx

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Your last two words are what I am doing now!
May I just have a go at translating
Aussies are too gay line?

Aussies too are happy! lol good one we need a bit of humour dont we?

Thank you...Teddy

teddy 15
u r great

author comment

Dear lovedly, I'm kinda confused by your poem. I understand, but it's a bit much, sort of wandering, what with Alexander the Great and all that. Will return when my mind works better.

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Know then thyself, presume not God to scan,
The proper study of Mankind is Man.
Plac’d on this isthmus of a middle state,
A being darkly wise, and rudely great….

An Essay On Man, III, Alexander Pope.

This poem is based on a poetess
who keeps traveling on a horse
but never looks back etc....

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since morning

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