Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
OCEAN'S BLUE
OCEAN’S BLUE
I slip and slide between
dark and light
like a drowning man
swept away with fear and doubt
in a river raging,
blinded to that saving grace
to cling onto.
but as the waters flow
into Ocean’s blue
I will know the time to let go
for we alI must follow…
Editing stage:
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.
User login
Author information
Other recent work
Active Workshops & Contests
Contest
Workshop
- Splash Pool: How to use imagery in poetry..
- Wading Pool: Neopoet How To Video Resources
- Olympic Pool: Earn A Poem Workshop 2
- Olympic Pool: Earn A Poem Workshop 1
- Plunge Pool: Stream Workshop
Comments
lovedly
Tue, 2016-01-26 18:34
your poetry is so wonderful
Joe
compose one for the welfare of
Neopoet Snow
Geremia
Tue, 2016-01-26 18:37
will try, my friend
will try, my friend
author commentSparrow
Tue, 2016-01-26 18:57
Joe
a lovely piece from your thoughts again,
we all head toward the Ocean..
Take care, Yours, Ian..
.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
Esker
Tue, 2016-01-26 19:03
wow.......ur poetry rocks!
brave....hell man U are a hardrock!
happy to call U friend Joe!
essence...
got that one from U
I understand now
U help me so much
forever
carry the fire my brother
I shall
thank U
and we go on
till the end!
mr wolf!
lovedly
Wed, 2016-01-27 19:50
very few
comment here on very few
you are one
second is Ian
Geremia
Wed, 2016-01-27 20:38
Yes, nothing has changed, I
Yes, nothing has changed, I post for my own pleasure and am glad to see there are true poets on this site who recognize true poetry,
I am just happy I still have a mind.
joe
author commentlovedly
Wed, 2016-01-27 23:42
so am I
as i too have a mind
and hope you will remember me
when reading and commenting poetry
today i saw my profile
hundreds of poems i did compile
but owing to Neopeoets non interest
they remain shelved
unread in files
this ordains NEO'S DEMISE!
Side but what a prize
Geremia
Thu, 2016-01-28 08:52
It is difficult to write,
It is difficult to write, Painful. But I do it for the sake of my own mental health and to remain in contact with friends like you.
[Richard for Joe]
author commentlovedly
Thu, 2016-01-28 11:35
thank you
it is essential to keep
ones mind
ACTIVE