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o my not again

Blonde waitress

now you challenge me
Blonde waitress

a solo guy watches
all come and go

which one will come
then not go
awaiting some one
who has failed to come...

get up sailor
your time has come
God has sent you a free gift
go the
Blonde one
now lift
and
be this the aim of your life
do justice
as you may wish

sailor now you ought to be happy
the night is still young
a new story
has now sprung

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Well my sweet friend, I see you have found another muse to draw inspiration from. My pleasure!

Joe

My mind's writing cheques my body can't cash.

I assure you
you read me
and i shall too
tc

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author comment

this one really needs clarifying its a little bit of a mess and needs to be edited with a few words taken out and a few more thrown in

you have the skills to do this ;)

love JC x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

which in
do pitch in

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