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O LOVE ME DAWN ...BUT ///continued///

Whether we will participate
or decimate
is the times dictate
no one can say

I for one can never be sure
the cancer of my EGO
has no cure

I want to achieve
poetic recognition
of money fame
I have no audition

all I want to see
ere I merge with eternity
is mans' wildness of thought
become naught

the I in me should dissolve
like salt, does water absorb.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
FUN COMMENTS MAY READ MINE GALS AND GUYS
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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in this line: no one can (that) say remove (that)
my favorite lines are:

I for one can never be sure
the cancer of my EGO
has no cure

*hugs, Cat

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I enjoy the fact you like to still read me Others have maybe different views of silence

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we are getting into the summer months now. people are busy doing lots of things outdoors. we will see them return in the Autumn, I suspect.

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Summer is like burning inferno anywhere
now 'tis our turn to bake
or in the seaside merry make
watch gals and modern guys
in bikinis
flying as if with
a see through negligee
both gals and guys are sleek most look so sleek and at their life's peak all follow me silly you may be
life is enjoyable come and see we fly like birds through the wilderness just chase any ah it's your luck at best or worse some guys are better lookers be not jay just for their happiness pray till autumn comes your way lol Cats

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have you read these yet

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