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O dad where are you..,Now

When dads go away young
they leave behind memories
so fresh
these never ever age
as dad it appears is here still

but who can fight
against an unknown
unseen gods will

We alone have to severe grief
and our left over time kill

I wonder if dad knows or ever will
he must be ether by now
waiting my merger...
O dad
where will we meet
do indicate an RV
and tell me
how I will recognise thee

O heaven believe me
Dad did love me

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My thinking is that we all meet in the carbon and nitrogen cycles. The thought is very materialistic. It does not mean that I do not entertain the thought of a place where I may meet my parents and loved ones. Perhaps, I am in limbo. So bad! No matter what, I do like your poem and your thoughts.
I am still on earth, but I do believe that Dad only loves you.

Thank you for sharing.


hope dad catches up at my arrival

author comment

you have happy memories. Those are yours forever. I won't comment on people's beliefs but if they give you comfort that is the important thing.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy

thank you
but tis my mission to share
what I feel
take it or leave
'tis your own individual belief

author comment

A very stunning write Lovedly. I hope he sees and hears you wherever he is now.

hope he does
but in actuality all is a finale
unknown mystery
as there s no beyond beyond
we all know it
but regret to add

none accept

Thanks for you lovely comment
it does flare up in one's mind
a reasonable sympathetic solace

author comment

You are welcome, Lovedly .

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