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Nostalgia
It’s harder to see the light
In the little dog’s eyes
Sonorous sounds replay as soft whispers
No longer resonating like the
Icy floor,
Instead melting like the fleeting
Snowfall upon the grass
The remembrances come easily,
But soon dissipate
Replaced by idleness
With faint impressions left behind
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments
Frenchf
Tue, 2013-02-12 23:45
Did your dog die?
I was upset for days when mine was killed accidentally