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A Nod To The November Themes
Arm that plays with the wind
'tis mine but feels too free.
Travel light and travel fast;
the window down helps.
City lights and plights;
wish I could outrun myself.
No luck nor dice;
a spiritual rewrite?
No God would mistake
me for a worthy soul.
Maybe this time will be different.
Last few words:
Definitely a not so serious attempt to mash together all four of the November topics... Thought I would give it a try :-)
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Geezer
Sun, 2021-11-14 08:24
While there are...
no direct links with the themes, [titles]; I do see the obvious references. Very well written and thought out.~ Geez.
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Owl Has My Soul
Sun, 2021-11-14 08:50
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author commentOwl Has My Soul
Sun, 2021-11-14 08:48
You are correct Geez, I
You are correct Geez, I must admit -- I changed the title to properly reflect what you noted. It would be a true wonder to address the four themes in such a short poem, nigh impossible. It addresses one of the themes and nods to the other three...
author commentRay Whitaker
Sun, 2021-11-14 18:02
Nice piece!
A good read.
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Owl Has My Soul
Mon, 2021-11-15 09:48
Thank you Ray!
This was really fun to write :-)
author commentRay Whitaker
Tue, 2021-11-16 19:52
It moves well
IMHO. I really like the sense of progression. Lines 3-4-5-6 are IMHO masterful.
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Owl Has My Soul
Wed, 2021-11-17 12:27
Thanks Ray...
Wow... Thank you for your comments. You know, I wrote this in about 20 minutes... Not really sure if it was that good or not... but I did sense that it did link the four topics together and seemed just to flow...
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