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A Nod To The November Themes

Arm that plays with the wind
'tis mine but feels too free.
Travel light and travel fast;
the window down helps.
City lights and plights;
wish I could outrun myself.
No luck nor dice;
a spiritual rewrite?
No God would mistake
me for a worthy soul.

Maybe this time will be different.

Last few words: 
Definitely a not so serious attempt to mash together all four of the November topics... Thought I would give it a try :-)
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no direct links with the themes, [titles]; I do see the obvious references. Very well written and thought out.~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

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You are correct Geez, I must admit -- I changed the title to properly reflect what you noted. It would be a true wonder to address the four themes in such a short poem, nigh impossible. It addresses one of the themes and nods to the other three...

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A good read.

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This was really fun to write :-)

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IMHO. I really like the sense of progression. Lines 3-4-5-6 are IMHO masterful.

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Wow... Thank you for your comments. You know, I wrote this in about 20 minutes... Not really sure if it was that good or not... but I did sense that it did link the four topics together and seemed just to flow...

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