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No Way With Words

It's such a curiosity
when I write a poem, each day;

I'm not prone towards ambiguosity
but, it's still missed, what I've tried to say!

My verses aren't extraordinary
to ignite thoughts' spark's the goal,

I may be a candidate for dictionary lessons
if my train of thought's not, "whole"!

I could try another language
but, in the time it takes to learn,

with their nounages, and verbages,
I'd invent a "me" that foreigners, could spurn!

Someday, in a very perfect land
I'll communicate, without a doubt;

everything to help you understand
what my heart would like to shout!

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

I really enjoyed this work on a poet's struggle to be understood. I know the intent of some of my stuff is misunderstood lol...............scribbler

..at least you understood my plight!
doc.:)

Neopoet is "newtriffic" !
...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
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