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No Way With Words
It's such a curiosity
when I write a poem, each day;
I'm not prone towards ambiguosity
but, it's still missed, what I've tried to say!
My verses aren't extraordinary
to ignite thoughts' spark's the goal,
I may be a candidate for dictionary lessons
if my train of thought's not, "whole"!
I could try another language
but, in the time it takes to learn,
with their nounages, and verbages,
I'd invent a "me" that foreigners, could spurn!
Someday, in a very perfect land
I'll communicate, without a doubt;
everything to help you understand
what my heart would like to shout!
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
scribbler
Fri, 2011-01-07 20:21
hey doc
I really enjoyed this work on a poet's struggle to be understood. I know the intent of some of my stuff is misunderstood lol...............scribbler
docmaverick
Mon, 2011-01-10 06:44
Thanx, scribbler...
..at least you understood my plight!
doc.:)
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