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late summer rise
visions of tomorrow
glory of love

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"In The Morning" for a title? This made me think of getting up late morning and thinking about waking up here every morning.
~Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

However, the philosophy of haiku has been preserved: the focus on a brief moment in time; a use of provocative, colorful images; an ability to be read in one breath; and a sense of sudden enlightenment and illumination.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

Nice Haiku. The second line needs another syllable to be true to form for the 5-7-5 syllables. I like your poem.

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see I compose breathless
and now my readings have touched over 8300 ++++readings
on poems
I AIN'T RUNNING for a NOBEL .......
GUYS just love me
read my poems
you all are welcome

it's just me attempting to understand poetry it's forms, and it's poets, ---well beyond my present skill level. You can't stay the same, in place, or you rust and become stagnant. IMHO

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