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late summer rise
visions of tomorrow
glory of love
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Geezer
Tue, 2022-08-09 00:56
How about...
"In The Morning" for a title? This made me think of getting up late morning and thinking about waking up here every morning.
~Geezer.
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Jackweb
Tue, 2022-08-09 10:57
Haiku
However, the philosophy of haiku has been preserved: the focus on a brief moment in time; a use of provocative, colorful images; an ability to be read in one breath; and a sense of sudden enlightenment and illumination.
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Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2022-08-12 15:53
Welcome to this website!
Nice Haiku. The second line needs another syllable to be true to form for the 5-7-5 syllables. I like your poem.
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-08-12 16:02
why waste time counting syllables all day all night
see I compose breathless
and now my readings have touched over 8300 ++++readings
on poems
I AIN'T RUNNING for a NOBEL .......
GUYS just love me
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you all are welcome
Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2022-08-12 16:43
Well, if it was a waste of time, then
it's just me attempting to understand poetry it's forms, and it's poets, ---well beyond my present skill level. You can't stay the same, in place, or you rust and become stagnant. IMHO
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