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No Time To Die

Age never speaks
just now I learned
a young
not aged one
not yet FIFTY
left the world suddenly
happily
no grief
only relief
others grieve
lucky he
no pain
nor pill
BUDDHA 's
will

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
GONE WITH THE BREEZE TO FREEZE A young one passes away soonly
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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a quote from the buddah----“The trouble is, you think you have time.”

i am sorry if this is personal loss. a very good poem, makes us all think hey, time to act and time to live happy.

Thank you...Teddy

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