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No Time To Die

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2021-02-09 16:27

Age never speaks
just now I learned
a young
not aged one
not yet FIFTY
left the world suddenly
happily
no grief
only relief
others grieve
lucky he
no pain
nor pill
BUDDHA 's
will

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
GONE WITH THE BREEZE TO FREEZE A young one passes away soonly
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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lovedly

Fri, 2021-02-19 11:46

lovedly's picture

READ THIS TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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lovedly

Fri, 2021-02-19 13:01

lovedly's picture

TO TIME NOW I HAVE BEEN SOLD
OLE IS GOAL
15 OR 1015

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