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No Time To Die
Age never speaks
just now I learned
a young
not aged one
not yet FIFTY
left the world suddenly
happily
no grief
only relief
others grieve
lucky he
no pain
nor pill
BUDDHA 's
will
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
GONE WITH THE BREEZE TO FREEZE A young one passes away soonly
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
lovedly
Fri, 2021-02-19 11:46
5 DAYS SINCE
READ THIS TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Teddy15
Fri, 2021-02-19 12:54
Dear Lovedly
a quote from the buddah----“The trouble is, you think you have time.”
i am sorry if this is personal loss. a very good poem, makes us all think hey, time to act and time to live happy.
Thank you...Teddy
lovedly
Fri, 2021-02-19 13:01
he was BUDDHA OLD
TO TIME NOW I HAVE BEEN SOLD
OLE IS GOAL
15 OR 1015