Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

NO MOOD

No mood
stay silent today

no rain
no snow

after a long silence
sun came
hot and all alone
till sunset came
sun set

chill winds took over again
met says tomorrow it may rain.

Oh what a confusing
winter still lingers

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

is that you have written something that resonate with all of us. The weather is something that we all can relate to and commiserate about. It often happens that our mood may be opposite the weather, as we almost feel like it is against us no matter which way it goes. ~Geez.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

You liked the raw mood in between
let's see who else joins in
the sun is out again
but not as a fire yet
you bet

author comment

first it rains, then it snows. then it rains again. today it snowed! where the heck is Spring???

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

in my back yard
come and see
snow remains are
still shining
when its sunny
and
when it rains remember it's wintry cold
not the sunny springy rain
you wish to hold
in your fold

author comment
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.