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nirvanic prance

Submitted by loved on Mon, 2013-01-14 13:07

into me
I wonder why the world saddens
as if twere I alone
seeking happiness
in the madness of misery
all alone
twas my lot perhaps
I may not moan
and add that many think of the mundane world
as bad,
but rejoice,
you are about to reach a stage of happiness
bliss
kiss and as you awaken your kundalini
Nirvana lays down bare before thee
hopefully thou shalt enjoy the prance,
some call it a mythical dance
but in heaven as drums beat
the Lordships enjoy a lovers retreat

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Frenchf

Mon, 2013-01-14 19:38

Described it if so?
Would have liked more.

loved

Mon, 2013-01-14 23:58

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no not from Kama Sutra

though we think alike perhaps
glad you liked it
hahaha

loved

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Seren

Tue, 2013-01-15 02:32

Seren's picture

what can I say another lovely write, and for the great honour I am humbled thank you ... I think its a brilliant write looking into the minds of others when they dwell in misery or sadness

You really have come a long way since your beginning so very long ago

loe JC xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

loved

Tue, 2013-01-15 08:06

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and thanks too
to you....

loved

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