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Nike high lie?
Female ambition
as voter card Caucasian
but no confusion
Ending human rights
due to members supposed slights
Moral leading lights?
Lobby alignment
Political sentiment
Inducing payment
Enemies to shun
Aiding future election
Presidential run
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
chevyvent
Wed, 2018-06-20 14:15
This piece needs a great deal of work.
This piece needs a great deal of work. Perhaps its just me but here's what i see
The chance to move further then ever before the willingness to explore awe so much more
Through words we can agree to both disagree thats the beauty of our society.
I will give you this the endings not too bad
Mario Vitale
OriginalRhyku
Wed, 2018-06-20 15:11
Mario
appreciate your review. As far as more work, there is not much more that can be said about a plastic personality and paid politician who is so ambitious that she will go to any length to play to her base and the controlling lobby that she hopes will guide her to the top job. Human rights only apply to a few nations as far as she is concerned and ignorance is bliss as far as all the other countries are concerned.
author commentOriginalRhyku
Wed, 2018-06-20 15:11
Mario
appreciate your review. As far as more work, there is not much more that can be said about a plastic personality and paid politician who is so ambitious that she will go to any length to play to her base and the controlling lobby that she hopes will guide her to the top job. Human rights only apply to a few nations as far as she is concerned and ignorance is bliss as far as all the other countries are concerned.
author commentOriginalRhyku
Wed, 2018-06-20 16:36
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