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Niagara Falls

Niagara Falls

I only wish you had been to Niagara
romance never ends there ever,
I would love to have one each day
come what may
winter spring or snow
the Niagara always does love grow

upon my life’s arc
there is a permanent glow
how I wish all of you
sooner than later to Niagara go
to make the most beautiful
of all God's presentations of love
naturally flow

now stop short
you hearts palpitate
take a car
a flight right away
stay at any lovely
Niagara fall s over looking place
do stay
so your romance will bloom
that’s what I can surely say.

lovedly

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It is a lovely place.
I went there a while back the temperature was -10C and it was really great as there was no mist, all the sides were frozen.. The American falls were huge icicles hung waiting for spring.
I think we caught it at the right time..
Best of all we went up in the tower there and the lift was on the outside and the view was special.
Loved your piece, Yours Ian ..

Words can build a nation

you were luckier than me to c

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long ago, to ride the Maid of The Mist behind the falls! Magnificent!
~ Gee.
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to ''ride the Maid''
of The Mist
behind
the falls!
Magnificent!

well worded thanks

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